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Keep Your Enemies Close - PrologueThe trees were dank in colour, malevolently swaying in the rough winds. Usually such benign things wouldn't have an effect on Indianna, but in the past couple of days circumstances had changed. War was coming and she knew it, she could smell it. Every time that she recalled what they discovered her stomach dropped.
Her eyes adjusted from the view out of her window to the reflection that was sprayed across the glistening glass. Such beauty, red, luscious; petite lips, huge brown eyes that begged for attention; high cheek bones and a nose that gave away her Spanish heritage. Indianna's long, thick, brown locks hung across her voluptuous breas

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BrisVegas, aka Brisbane, Australia

3 tone photo-manipulation

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Just more of an experiment :)
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Critique by *Zilenna Nov 21, 2012, 7:44:13 PM
Composition wise - the blank spaces in the completely shadowed parts of buildings and the sky balance well. All the geometric lines and squares really allow for the depth to be felt despite the 2D nature of the monotone look, which can at times wash out what the artist intended. At first glance, the randomness of the center clouds I almost described as a distraction. Then I decided no, it was an interest point to make me look at the picture harder, and reminds the viewer that this is a real place, with organic textures and isn't just a skyline drawn with a ruller. For an expirement, I believe you succeeded. The geometry of this city really does allow for some interesting views, I would love to see you continue to expirement here.
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*Zilenna Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love your little toriography stamp. :D
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*1618Tori Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist
Hehe! Thank you for noticing :XD: I thought it was genius ;)
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