Composition wise - the blank spaces in the completely shadowed parts of buildings and the sky balance well. All the geometric lines and squares really allow for the depth to be felt despite the 2D nature of the monotone look, which can at times wash out what the artist intended. At first glance, the randomness of the center clouds I almost described as a distraction. Then I decided no, it was an interest point to make me look at the picture harder, and reminds the viewer that this is a real place, with organic textures and isn't just a skyline drawn with a ruller. For an expirement, I believe you succeeded. The geometry of this city really does allow for some interesting views, I would love to see you continue to expirement here.